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Post by Maniak on Mar 19, 2018 1:31:10 GMT
I liked the first verse especially and the Sway line made me laugh but I kinda preferred your first two songs a bit more. Keep it up tho, you still have more bars than me.
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Post by bladefd on Mar 19, 2018 5:44:22 GMT
Did you write the lyrics and create your own beat? It's not bad for someone starting out imo. All about practice and working on it. You might have already considered it, but you can create remixes of songs already out there and get your own portfolio up on a blog. Lots of singers started just singing songs out there already and making their own version of them.
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Post by SugarHill on Mar 19, 2018 9:29:13 GMT
this is really good man. i'm not even tryin to gas you my favorite one
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Post by SugarHill on Mar 21, 2018 15:09:49 GMT
@rad
Can i make mixtape art for u? U dont have to use it
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Post by Deleted on Mar 21, 2018 15:53:53 GMT
@rad Can i make mixtape art for u? U dont have to use it Sure if you really want to. Do you draw or is it digital?
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Post by SugarHill on Mar 21, 2018 17:33:11 GMT
@rad Can i make mixtape art for u? U dont have to use it Sure if you really want to. Do you draw or is it digital? digital. ive done stuff for ppl before.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 21, 2018 18:02:58 GMT
Sure if you really want to. Do you draw or is it digital? digital. ive done stuff for ppl before. Bet. I actually had a couple of cover ideas
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Post by SugarHill on Mar 21, 2018 18:14:57 GMT
digital. ive done stuff for ppl before. Bet. I actually had a couple of cover ideas give me ur ideas. the best thing about covers is that it can be anything. i can take a picture of a dirty balcony rn and slap the parental advisory tag with a title and that shit is fire
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Post by Deleted on Mar 21, 2018 18:23:53 GMT
Bet. I actually had a couple of cover ideas give me ur ideas. the best thing about covers is that it can be anything. i can take a picture of a dirty balcony rn and slap the parental advisory tag with a title and that shit is fire Well one i want is a first person perspective with an arm reaching out of the water, holding a few single dollar bills. And the arm is reaching towards a ship with people standing on it but u only see the people's legs, and they're wearing jordan sneakers and shit like that. On the deck of the ship u see riches like treasure chests and maybe a gold chain hanging off almost falling into the water
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Post by SugarHill on Mar 21, 2018 18:33:09 GMT
give me ur ideas. the best thing about covers is that it can be anything. i can take a picture of a dirty balcony rn and slap the parental advisory tag with a title and that shit is fire Well one i want is a first person perspective with an arm reaching out of the water, holding a few single dollar bills. And the arm is reaching towards a ship with people standing on it but u only see the people's legs, and they're wearing jordan sneakers and shit like that. On the deck of the ship u see riches like treasure chests and maybe a gold chain hanging off almost falling into the water i really wanna see if i can make this happen. sounds fun
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Post by Maniak on Mar 22, 2018 1:20:58 GMT
Bet. I actually had a couple of cover ideas give me ur ideas. the best thing about covers is that it can be anything. i can take a picture of a dirty balcony rn and slap the parental advisory tag with a title and that shit is fire Yea that sounds good.
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Post by Maniak on Mar 23, 2018 2:36:08 GMT
This tape is strong.
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Post by althornton on Mar 23, 2018 4:41:46 GMT
This tape is strong. "distance" is so beauriful
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Post by tsk on Mar 23, 2018 17:49:55 GMT
loved the 4-7 syllable rhythmic sections. Writing like that with fluidity is tough to do without compromising quality of lyrics or quality of flow. i think this is my favorite of the ones you've posted for. Beat is flames. this was staright flames we like two peas in a pod, im re-energized on the pretense of reapin a lot never go to sleep on the job even if i got my feet in the plot
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Post by Deleted on Mar 23, 2018 18:12:16 GMT
loved the 4-7 syllable rhythmic sections. Writing like that with fluidity is tough to do without compromising quality of lyrics or quality of flow. i think this is my favorite of the ones you've posted for. Beat is flames. this was staright flames we like two peas in a pod, im re-energized on the pretense of reapin a lot never go to sleep on the job even if i got my feet in the plot Appreciate the love, homie
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Post by SugarHill on Mar 23, 2018 20:18:11 GMT
@rad
highkey having problems. lol
I thought this would be a lot easier. Do you by chance have any other ideas?
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Post by Deleted on Mar 23, 2018 21:37:10 GMT
@rad highkey having problems. lol I thought this would be a lot easier. Do you by chance have any other ideas? Haha it's all good. Umm, as far as other ideas I think a picture of two cusped hands holding the sun would be cool for my 2nd ep.
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Post by althornton on Mar 24, 2018 7:27:49 GMT
it's cool, i liked the previous one more and i really think that shit was fucking good but this one is well written too. i think a solid video might make me like it more too
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Post by Deleted on Mar 24, 2018 16:17:53 GMT
it's cool, i liked the previous one more and i really think that shit was fucking good but this one is well written too. i think a solid video might make me like it more too yeah i think the video will make a lot of people enjoy the song more as will explain the idea and concept behind the song. i have a few ideas for it.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 30, 2018 13:43:46 GMT
SugarHill i have another cover idea for you if you're interested
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Post by SugarHill on Mar 30, 2018 13:58:12 GMT
SugarHill i have another cover idea for you if you're interested very much
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Post by Deleted on Mar 30, 2018 14:21:37 GMT
SugarHill i have another cover idea for you if you're interested very much Alright this one is really simple. I just want it to be a frontal shot of some fine ass girl smiling while wearing a sundress (design on the dress is up to you). But I want her to be subtly devilish. Like, she's just enjoying the breeze or some shit and you see a hint of a devil tail behind her or some shit.
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Post by SugarHill on Mar 30, 2018 16:44:29 GMT
Alright this one is really simple. I just want it to be a frontal shot of some fine ass girl smiling while wearing a sundress (design on the dress is up to you). But I want her to be subtly devilish. Like, she's just enjoying the breeze or some shit and you see a hint of a devil tail behind her or some shit. lol i didnt get notification for this. this is simple enough
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Post by SugarHill on Mar 30, 2018 16:46:23 GMT
first thing i found is this subtle enough?
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Post by Deleted on Mar 30, 2018 18:22:47 GMT
first thing i found is this subtle enough? So subtle it looks like she's wearing a nightgown
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Post by SugarHill on Mar 31, 2018 16:22:12 GMT
@rad
do u have any titles in mind for girl in sundress? i'm basically done two designs plus i kinda did some weird stuff while fucking with colors and thought they looked cool as covers. otherwise im running with NO TITLE as a title
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Post by Deleted on Mar 31, 2018 16:59:07 GMT
@rad do u have any titles in mind for girl in sundress? i'm basically done two designs plus i kinda did some weird stuff while fucking with colors and thought they looked cool as covers. otherwise im running with NO TITLE as a title Yeah it's gonna be called "Devil in a Sundress"
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Post by SugarHill on Mar 31, 2018 19:12:33 GMT
@rad do u have any titles in mind for girl in sundress? i'm basically done two designs plus i kinda did some weird stuff while fucking with colors and thought they looked cool as covers. otherwise im running with NO TITLE as a title Yeah it's gonna be called "Devil in a Sundress" okay here is the first design and girl. I really like this pic cuz I think it captures the idea ur looking for in her face. there is something off about her like she's plotting. ur name and how it's stylized and fonts can easily be changed the other one is a black girl and she's happier. idk if ur into minimalist stuff but I think those make for cool covers/posters. it's also possible to have a more busy cover with a true background
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Post by Deleted on Mar 31, 2018 20:44:32 GMT
Yeah it's gonna be called "Devil in a Sundress" okay here is the first design and girl. I really like this pic cuz I think it captures the idea ur looking for in her face. there is something off about her like she's plotting. ur name and how it's stylized and fonts can easily be changed the other one is a black girl and she's happier. idk if ur into minimalist stuff but I think those make for cool covers/posters. it's also possible to have a more busy cover with a true background i like this picture too as well as all of these covers. i'd be interested in seeing the other pic / designs as well. as far as title and name placement i'm not sure yet but i like how you did it in all of these. and yeah i fuck with the minimalist style. that's what i had in mind for this particular cover these are dope foreal man
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Post by Maniak on Mar 31, 2018 22:18:50 GMT
One on the far right is the best. The font on the middle one looks a little struggle
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